Awesome food truck April! I like how the colours you use match the idea of ice cream. Great writing too, I think you described ice cream very well. I agree that you can feel ice cream dripping down your hand, that always happens on a hot day!
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Hi April , i like your food truck
ReplyDeleteAwesome food truck April! I like how the colours you use match the idea of ice cream. Great writing too, I think you described ice cream very well. I agree that you can feel ice cream dripping down your hand, that always happens on a hot day!
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