Another great day of learning April. I enjoyed reading your writing, you used good descriptive words. I would have liked to hear more. Nice work doing a few Maths tasks, make sure you show your working out and the question. I like your chocolate shape did it have a box to in? Good effort.
thank you me and my mum we wore melting chocolate well cooking chocolate and we just realized the cooking chocolate was expired and all that work me and mum wore doing.
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Another great day of learning April. I enjoyed reading your writing, you used good descriptive words. I would have liked to hear more. Nice work doing a few Maths tasks, make sure you show your working out and the question. I like your chocolate shape did it have a box to in? Good effort.
ReplyDeletethank you me and my mum we wore melting chocolate well cooking chocolate and we just realized the cooking chocolate was expired and all that work me and mum wore doing.
DeleteHi April I like your chocolate heart drawing. one thing you could fix is try not to make it to big
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