Kia ora April my name is Kamaka and I go to Kereru park campus I am be A year 7 this year I think or 6 I forgot but I see you work hard on this and you have no comments so here is one well got to go Bye :)
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Kia ora April my name is Kamaka and I go to Kereru park campus I am be A year 7 this year I think or 6 I forgot but I see you work hard on this and you have no comments so here is one well got to go Bye :)
ReplyDeletekia ora april
ReplyDeletei know you worked hard on this and i personally think is is good but maybe next time you can put a background and lots of detail
bye april